1) Перестрой предложение: We're having a great time in Dubai.
2) We're staying in the Burj Al Arab hotel, which has 7 stars. This is the best hotel and it's form reminds me of a boat. (Так будет получше)
3) Luxe room замени на luxe suite.
4) ... we saw Dubai....
5) Замени "Here it has an amazing view..." на Up from here Dubai has an amazing view.
6) ... had a lunch.. (артикль забыл)
7)... the food was delicious and the view on the town was brilliant. (лучше так сказать)
8) Then we went TO see THE fountain show. (без of Dubai)
9) It IS located.... of-не нужно тут
10) This is the largest and the highest fountain in the world.
11) Не walk, а ride
<span><span>Types of holiday: <em>hitch-hiking, cruise, excursion, camping, safari</em>
Places where people stay on holiday: <em>hotel, youth hostel, tent, farmstay</em>
Places people visit on holiday:<em> museum, galleries, beach</em>
Things people do on holiday: <em>sightseeing, skiing, sunbathing, relax</em>
Problems people can have on holiday: <em>crowds, queues, lost luggage, delays</em>
<em>adventure? – </em></span><em>приключения (не знаю куда написать</em><span><em>)</em></span></span>
Они живут в деревне (Название).Там всегда уютно и ждут каждое лето пока я приеду.У них в доме живет кот (кошка) (кличка) и большая собака(кличка). В деревне очень много забот. Мне там очень нравится!