1) Fern said to her mother - не "said to", a "asked".
2) ax - такого слова нет, зато есть слово "axe".
3) to kill is a runt pig - "is" - лишнее.
4) A girl of eight years - правильнее будет написать "A eight years old girl".
5) seared - может быть "scared"?
6) ran for his father - "girl" - женский род, а потому не "his", a "her".
7) Fern said to not kill it, please - "please" - лишнее.
8) would have - правильно использовать "had" (без "would").
9) said she went back to the house - 1) "said that she went". 2) "back into the house".
10) and he would bring the runt - "and that he would...".
11) Arable pig brought into the house, he was a newborn and white - "When Arable brought the pig into the house, it was newborn and white".
12) The father said he than belongs to Fern - "The father said that it belongs to Fern".
13) Girl - "The girl".
14) She looked at him and said that he was perfect - "She looked at it and said that it was perfect".
1. if
2. if
3. unless
4. if
5. unless
1. visit, will have
2. passes, will organise
3. won't go, come
4. isn't, will have
5. won't be able to, brings
6. will be, doesn't come
7. won't listen, stop
1.i was sitting in front of the fire when they called out to me.
2.i was getting the tea ready when my mother came home from work
3.she was dusting the carpet when her cat knocked a vase off the table.
4.we were finishing our tea when there was a knock at the door.
5.they were going down the garden path when she stopped and waved
I love pizza because it is very useful and tasty dough with my parents went there pretty good and the waiters are my favorite dish is pizza